This one is my favorite by far. I think the yellowish green could use some sort of more pleasant hue, but Ilike the way that the word bubbles pop off the page, and I like the way it looks kind of classy.
I like this one, but I think the plain white background is a little too stark, and it makes Haley and Johnny look sick. Maybe a different fourth color would fix this up. Again the yellowish green could use some deharshing
I like this because it kind of has a daily comic strip vibe to it. the background looks less stark because there's more white space in it, but it still looks a little empty
I like this one, but it was kind of a lot of work for the result I got. Not that I mind doing a lot of hard work, but I can't say it's particularly better than the ones above it. I know people are super excited about FULL COLOR sometimes, and I know that I actually kept most of the colors towards the gray side of the scale, so they're not hammering you in the face, but with the exception of maybe a poor choice in a background color for the first couple frames I actually like those more in ways.I don' t know, any thoughts?

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