page 2 finished

This page had some real problems that occurred within it. In fact, if you were to see the original page, before it got edited in photoshop, it would look noticeably different. For one, the panel at the bottom of the page's image has been greatly scaled up. You were able to see all the way to end of the book bag. It's actually a shame that it got cut out, because I liked some of the detail. BUT detail is detail, and I can always shove it into another panel some other time.

Page One complete?

My special lady wants it hand written - I would prefer to type it out. I guess it all depends - is this legible enough? I'd like it to be readable without having to zoom in a whole lot, and my handwriting can't really do that that well.

Scrapped Color style

I decided against my comic being all colored like this. This panel worked, but some of the other panels on the same page didn't look that great. Maybe I'll post that scrapped page up here after I get it done for reals.

Raspberry Redd IN #1 layout collection

Here is the entire thing, in spread form. For some reason it seems as if Blogger has decided to do it's own this as it feels necessary, which I guess is fine, if it didn't mean reordering my pictures however it feels. That being said I'm incredibly happy with myself for having completed these, even if it ends up that I got almost half of these done in one day. What I'm doing for the time being is model sheets, as I think there's some weird proportion issues within these layouts that I'd like to alay during the comic itself.

THAT BEING SAID, I'm sure that this comic is INCREDIBLY hard to follow without any text for the most part, but from an artistic standpoint, if you could tell me what I need to change, what should be added, and what does and doesn't work compositionally I would be extremely grateful.

Raz Layouts 22-24

Here's the last batch of them, I really didn't think I'd actually be able to do this, so I'm pretty proud of myself. I have that wrist ache from drawing so much, which is a good hurt to have.

layouts 19 thru 21

I am mercilessly cutting a bloody swath through these layouts today. If I went at this rate before, I'd be coloring these by now.

laid out for 16-18

More layouts. Hopefully I can get the rest of these done today, but I've got some complicated ones to do directly after this one.